After receiving this feedback from our teacher on our first drat of the 25 Word Pitch I could see where we had gone wrong after looking at other pitches. Also, after overlooking the pitch that I had made I could understand that the point I wanted to make wasn't coming across very well. So, after looking at other pitches and asking advise from the teacher we, as a group, decided to start all over on different software and to put across our idea much better and clearer for other people viewing it to understand.
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